View Full Version : feedback for my site

05 Jun 2007, 04:49 AM
hi to all,
please help me to improve my site http://www.sastaghar.com
i made this site for realestate purpose in all over world. please give me your reviews it will help me.


05 Jun 2007, 12:13 PM
Get a native English speaker to proofread your text. It is reads very stilted and has numerous grammatical errors in it. Also consider using affordable or some other word rather than cheap for describing houses as cheap denotes poor quality in addition to inexpensive.

The first item in your navigation is Helpful Links that I thought was a link. Apparently it's supposed to be a title for the navigation? It's confusing being there as it looks like something you can click on, but you can't. People will know that this list of items is the navigation, so there's no need to title it, especially when that title makes it harder to use.

The top navigation (Firefox/Mac) looks like this:
Advertise With Us Home Finance NRI Services Register Contact
The "Us" in "Contact Us" is on a second line, all the way to the left.

I'm assuming there is supposed to be some content somewhere on the site? As it is it just seems to be Google ads everywhere, which indicates that it's not a really a business site, as they generally don't have to rely on ads for competitor sites to make money.