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jsullivan14
05 Jan 2008, 02:55 PM
Hey everyone,

I just launched a new website for my IT Consulting business, and would like to gather some feedback/suggestions from you guys.

The url is:
http://www.xjay.ca/

or alternatively:
http://www.xjayvancouver.ca/

The name of my company is X-Jay Technologies

Any input is appreciated.

Thanks!

matte
05 Jan 2008, 06:22 PM
clean looking site

suggest looking at the following areas
1. The text could do with a rewrite - there is more customer focus that could be achieved plus getting rid of negative words.
2. Not keen on the arrows on the icons and even less keen on the crosses that appear (negative sentiment is introduced.)
3. Use of jargon - I accept that you have made great efforts in the education area to explain stuff but this

Silverlight: Silverlight is a web browser based run-time that provides vector graphics, animation, and video (streaming) capabilities. It will likely become mainstream within 2 years, and should be considered on the cutting edge.

If your market is uneducated (I still wrestle with the term runtime after ten years on the web) then this will be meaningless to them. Better to be technically off base a bit but get the concept across than nothing. Maybe explain what it achieves?