What do you think?

This is the layout for a Flash website. It's being designed for a hip-hop dance & break dancing group. It's supposed to look bold and new.









And secondly,
This is the layout for an informational html website. It's being designed for a safety organization that's affiliated with the local police department. The target audience are parents and younger children. It should look colourful and inviting.





These were designed in the past two days.. So any comments or suggestions would be nice, because the designs are still up in the air.