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Thread: Site Review por favor

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Dec 2005
    Tulsa, Oklahoma

    Site Review por favor

    A site that I finished a couple of weeks ago. Any input would be appreciated it.

    Thanks, guys (& girls).

  2. #2
    Join Date
    Dec 2004
    It took me a while to find out what you did. Suggest moving the <h1> text content up higher, or have it in the graphic as well

    Look at your text - needs some work!!

    Your Customer Focus Rate: 21.43%
    You have 3 instances of customer-focused words.
    Your Self Focus Rate: 78.57%
    You have 5 instances of self-focused words.
    You have 6 instances of the Company Name.

    You speak about yourself approximately 3 times as often as you speak about your customers.
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    Get a caricature drawn from your photo (like my avatar).

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