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  1. #1
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
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    Looking for feedback

    Hey everyone,

    I just launched a new website for my IT Consulting business, and would like to gather some feedback/suggestions from you guys.

    The url is:
    http://www.xjay.ca/

    or alternatively:
    http://www.xjayvancouver.ca/

    The name of my company is X-Jay Technologies

    Any input is appreciated.

    Thanks!

  2. #2
    Join Date
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    clean looking site

    suggest looking at the following areas
    1. The text could do with a rewrite - there is more customer focus that could be achieved plus getting rid of negative words.
    2. Not keen on the arrows on the icons and even less keen on the crosses that appear (negative sentiment is introduced.)
    3. Use of jargon - I accept that you have made great efforts in the education area to explain stuff but this
    Silverlight: Silverlight is a web browser based run-time that provides vector graphics, animation, and video (streaming) capabilities. It will likely become mainstream within 2 years, and should be considered on the cutting edge.
    If your market is uneducated (I still wrestle with the term runtime after ten years on the web) then this will be meaningless to them. Better to be technically off base a bit but get the concept across than nothing. Maybe explain what it achieves?
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