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Thread: Please check out, and advise and critic

  1. #1
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    Please check out, and advise and critic

    Please check out our newly launched site and let me know your thoughts. It is http://www.datacenteronline.com and any input would be very helpful. It is not quite done yet but could use some input to for the polish.

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    For a start I think you have too many fonts. I'd simplify that as much as possible.

    Second, I'd suggest making it clearer what you do - have in clear letters "Data Center Hardware and Accessories" - saves confusion over people initially thinking you are a data center.

    Finally "Authorized Partners since 1994" with whom? Currently meaningless.


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